Wordiness Definition and Revision Activity
Answer Key
- Because my parents were no longer able to care for my grandfather, they decided to place him in a nursing home.
- Shoney's milkshake bar is not working because it needs a replacement gear.
- Rocco can do relatively well on assignments at the last minute, but to get the A's he seeks, he always tries to start early.
- Ashley likes Star Trek better than Star Wars because it focuses on science and exploration while Star Wars focuses on religion and war.
- The committee decided that the primary issue regarding the river pollution was whether the clean-up should be done by community volunteers or if there was sufficient budget to pay city workers.