Adjectives and Adverbs

English language users love to add layers of descriptions. Think about the last time you ate something truly delicious. How many words could you use to describe it that don't use the name of the food at all? You can start simply, with sweet, salty, hot, or cold. But that's not enough, is it? How about delectable, tender, wholesome, flavorful, or pungent? What about describing how you ate it? We could use heartily, greedily, or carefully. We could also mention how it was prepared: freshly, skillfully, or healthily. We could go on and on. Using adjectives and adverbs adds information and interest to a text. Using these words correctly is important for a message to be easy for a reader to understand and visualize. Read these sections on using descriptive words correctly.

Adjectives

Order of Adjectives

Adjectives need to be placed in a particular order. What information do you post first?  If you're a native English speaker, you can probably figure out the order without any thought.  That's because you understand English grammar - even if it's only because you know what “sounds” right.  And, if you're a non-native English speaker, you've probably been schooled in the order.

Below, you'll find a table illustrating the royal order of adjectives. Again, native English speakers follow the order - but we don't always know WHY.  Think about it.  Why would we automatically write four gorgeous, long-stemmed, red, silk roses rather than four silk, long stemmed, gorgeous, red roses?  What drives the order in our description?  The first example leads us down a logical path; the second example doesn't let us know which details are most important.


The Royal Order of Adjectives

Determiner Observation Physical Description Origin Material Qualifier Noun
Size Shape Age Color
a beautiful old Italian touring car
an expensive antique silver mirror
four gorgeous stemmed red silk roses
her short black hair
our big old English sheepdog
those square wooden hat boxes
that dilapidated little hunting cabin
several giant young American basketball players
some delicious Chinese food

There are some rules, though.  Here is the specific order for English language adjectives - intensifier, quality, size, age, color.  Look at the two sentences again.

Four gorgeous provides the intensifier and quality; long-stemmed provides the size; red, provides the color; and silk provides an additional detail.  Now look at the order of the adjectives in one of your own sentences and see if it makes sense to you.