Four Ways to Cut the Clutter From Your Business Writing
This video and the one that follows focus on eliminating details that are unnecessary in delivering a message so that the key points in the message are not only clearer but also more emphatic.
Watch the videos and then revise the sentence above to remove unnecessary words and give the message more impact. Work on this part first: "eliminating details that are unnecessary in delivering a message". Using just three words would emphasize the point. This may be a good opportunity for you to use the discussion forum to interact with other students taking this course. See if your response is correct and effective by trying it out on your colleagues.
Source: Diana Booher
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