Activity: Five-Paragraph Essay Writing

Site: Saylor Academy
Course: ENGL000: Pre-College English
Book: Activity: Five-Paragraph Essay Writing
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Date: Thursday, September 19, 2024, 12:09 PM

Description

Do this activity to practice expanding a paragraph into a five-paragraph essay. There is no correct answer, but you can look at the sample response essay to see if you are on the right track.

Five-Paragraph Essay Writing Activity

Please go back to the three paragraphs for which you wrote introductions in the introduction  writing activity (about preferring to drive, the First Third Bank call center job, and a scary haunted house experience). Choose one of these three paragraph essays and using the introduction and thesis statement you already wrote, please work on expanding it into a multi-paragraph essay. Make sure each of your three body paragraphs (one for each main idea) opens with a topic sentence which previews the main idea of the paragraph and provides a transition from the paragraph before it. You do not have to use content transitions, but I would encourage you to try writing one to get practice. Lastly, when you are putting together this essay, you will need to come up with additional details and examples. Since you didn't write the paragraph essay, you can just make up the additional support that will flesh out your body paragraphs. 

Here is an example that was based off the model introduction that was the example for the introduction writing activity (please note that this example has four main ideas, not three, resulting in a six-paragraph essay):

I have been planting a garden since I was a young girl and helping my mother plant one in our tiny backyard. As a child, I remember being so thrilled to watch all sorts of yummy food start to poke through the ground where we had planted seeds. As an adult, I have continued this practice because working in my garden brings me great joy, and there is nothing more delicious than a meal made from food I grew with my own hands. Each year when the ground starts to soften, I get excited for the steps I will take that will result in a yard full of food by the end of summer. Preparing my garden each spring involves getting the soil ready, planning what to plant where, creating rows and walkways, and fixing the garden fence.

The first step I have to take is preparing the soil. This involves mixing and overturning the dirt and dead plants with my rototiller. I simply walk it back and forth until the dirt looks dark brown and has a slightly moist feeling to the touch. It's important that I go slowly because the machine will get clogged on last year's plants and weeds if I don't give it time to break them up. Once I complete the first rototilling, I grab my twenty-five pound bag of fertilizer and sprinkle it all over the freshly overturned dirt by handfuls. I then rototill one more time to mix the fertilizer evenly into the soil. Well prepared and nurtured soil is essential to a successful garden.

Once the soil is prepared, I decide where I want to plant each vegetable. I use colored popsicle sticks to mark off plots of ground, so I will know what should go where when it comes time to plant. First, I plan out where to plant my tall vegetables, such as corn and beans.  They always go toward the back of my garden, so they don't block the sunlight from my smaller plants.  Then, I plan where to plant my squash and zucchini.  I mark off space around the outer edge of the garden, so they will have the fence to support them as they crawl and grow. Finally, I plot all my other vegetables in alternating rows.

After I plot out what I plan to plant where, my next step is creating the rows and walkways. My partner and I just redid our roof, so we have a lot of extra roofing shingles which work fantastically in the garden. Before I can create the walkways, I measure the space between rows and create a stack of shingles for each row.  Then, I lay them down with one shingle slightly overlapping the next in the measured spaces between my plotted rows to create my walkways in the garden. These walkways will be important later in the summer because they keep down the weeds and make it easy to get to all parts of the garden without stepping on any of my yummy plants.

My final step is fixing the garden fence. The chicken wire fence takes a beating from the winter's heavy snow accumulation and needs to be repaired each spring before I plant. To do this, first I take a slow walk around the fence noting where the wooden pegs have come out and where the wire has torn or rusted. After I assess the damages, I place new wooden pegs where they are needed and cut several pieces of replacement chicken wire. Then I cut out the rusted or broken parts of the fence leaving a hole just smaller than my replacement piece. To attach the new chicken wire pieces, I twist the ends of the new wire around the old wire edges. Lastly, I tie the chicken wire to the new wooden pegs with string securing my fence and making it more sturdy.

Once I have prepared my soil, plotted out what will be planted where, created my walkways, and fixed my fence, my garden is ready for planting. There are a lot of steps I need to take, but once everything is planted and I can see all my beautiful and tasty vegetables growing, it is all worth it!


Source: Erin Severs
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Sample Answer

*Answers will vary. This example is looking at the first introduction about driving from the introduction practice activity

There are many different ways one might travel. Some people might like traveling by plane because it can cut travel time down by a lot. 500 miles on a plane might only be a two or maybe three-hour trip while any other mode of transportation would take ten to fifteen hours. Other people really like to travel by bus or train because it is relaxing and can result in some nice time for reading a book, watching a movie, or taking a nap. However, I prefer to drive long distances over these other modes of travel because I am alone in my car with plenty of space, I can take a more relaxed pace, and it is less expensive.

First of all, I prefer to drive because I am alone in my car with plenty of space, and I don't have to deal with the large number of people crammed into a plane, bus, or train. As a result, I have plenty of space to bring or take home as much as a I like. For example, I drove to visit my parents last year, and they sent me home with a cast-iron fireplace set that included a poker, a broom, a large tea kettle, and a log grabber that all together weighed about forty pounds. If I hadn't drive, I would not have been able to take home any of this. In addition, planes, buses, and trains are always incredibly crowded, and inevitably, I will end up with someone kicking my seat or stretched over into my space. Also, all the germs from so many people in a small space often results in me getting sick after air, bus, or train travel. The last time I traveled by train, I came home with the flu and ended up giving it to my whole family. This doesn't happen when I am alone in my car.

Second of all, driving can be at a much more relaxed pace. For one thing, I don't ever have to worry about missing a departure time and can leave when I want to in the morning. One time when I was going to take a plane, I got caught in traffic on the way to the airport for a 7am flight and ended up missing my flight, something that would never happen if I am driving. I also don't have to deal with wait times at stops or layovers when I drive. I had to wait for over twelve hours once when a bus ended up running late and I ended up missing the connection. This would have never happened had I been driving. Lastly, I can stop for the bathroom or a meal when I want to. Planes, trains, and buses all have bathrooms on them, but they are usually really gross, so when I use those forms of transportation, I will often try to hold it or just not drink much, so I won't have to use them. When I drive, I can stop wherever I like and while public restrooms aren't the cleanest places, at least they are not moving (something which makes plane, bus, and train bathrooms particularly icky). I also can stop to get whatever kind of food I like (and whenever I am hungry) as opposed to being limited to what is available on the plane or train or what I can fit in my limited baggage.

Most importantly, I prefer to drive long distances because it is less expensive. The trip to my parents is approximately five hundred miles: a plane ticket is around $300, a train ticket is around $180, and a bus ticket is around $110. However, if I drive, the cost is only around $70 in gas which is far more affordable for me. In addition, with more space, I can bring more food and drink which means less money I might spend on refreshments. Particularly because this is a trip I make at least twice a year and am on a limited budget, cost is a very important factor.

While there are different benefits that come with all forms of travel, driving is my preferred way of traveling long distances. Between being alone with plenty of space, taking a more relaxed pace, and saving me money, I feel it is a better form of transportation that makes getting where I am going much less stressful.