Look Good in Print

This text will refresh your memory or introduce you to the common writing rules for Standard American English. It addresses the 22 most common errors found in writing. Applying and using the fundamentals of good writing will ensure that your writing is clear, concise, and achieves your intended purposes.

02A: SYNTAX AND WORD CHOICE

4. Choose the Right Pronoun

Pronouns are stand-ins for nouns. We use them so that we don't need to insert the same noun over and over again in our sentences. To see how pronouns are useful, consider the following two sentences: 

LIFE WITHOUT PRONOUNS:  Elon Musk, CEO of Tesla, Inc., says that Elon Musk will drive electric cars for the rest of Elon Musk's life. [Seriously?]

LIFE WITH PRONOUNS: Elon Musk, CEO of Tesla, Inc., says that he will drive electric cars for the rest of his life. [Much better, thank you].

In the first sentence, we get sick of hearing the name "Elon Musk". In the second sentence, the use of pronouns avoids this repetition without compromising the meaning; the use of "he" and "his" clearly refers to Elon Musk. (Note: In some situations, we deliberately avoid using pronouns because the reader can't tell what the pronoun refers to. We'll cover these situations in Fundamental #7: Avoid Ambiguous Pronoun References).

To choose the right pronoun, you need to know whether it's a subject or object in a sentence. We've already learned that subjects do the action in a sentence. Objects, on the other hand, either receive the action in the sentence or come after a preposition.   

With this distinction in mind, which of the two sentences uses the correct pronoun?

SENTENCE 1:  Devon and I are going to the company barbeque.

SENTENCE 2:  Devon and me are going to the company barbeque. 

First, determine whether the pronoun is operating as a subject or an object. In Sentences 1 and 2 above, the pronoun is doing the action of going to the barbecue; it is the subject. The pronoun needs to be "I" (subjective case), so Sentence 1 is correct.

Now try this pair of sentences:

SENTENCE 1: My team leader is going with Devon and I to the company barbeque. 

SENTENCE 2: My team leader is going with Devon and me to the company barbeque. 

The "team leader" is doing the action. "Devon" and "you" are the objects of the preposition "with," so the pronoun needs to be in the objective case (me). Sentence 2 is correct. 

Tip: In your mind, leave out the intervening words: "My team leader is going with ___ to the company barbecue". Would you say "I" or "me"? You'll have less difficulty seeing that "me" is correct if you remove "Devon and" from the sentence.  

We've covered situations that call for subjective vs. objective pronouns. We need to introduce a third type of pronoun: possessive. Possessive pronouns indicate that someone possesses or owns something. When referring to the lunch that you brought to school, for example, you wouldn't say "I brought me lunch today" (unless you're deliberately employing a Cockney accent). You would use the possessive pronoun, "my".

Exhibit 2A.1 lists the subjective, objective, and possessive pronouns for each "person" (or potential actor) in a sentence. 

SINGULAR

PLURAL

 

subjective

objective

possessive

subjective

objective

possessive

1st person

I

me

my, mine

We

us

our, ours

2nd person

you

you

your, yours

You

you

your, yours

3rd person

he

she

it

him

her

it

his

her,  hers

its

they

 

them

their, theirs


Exhibit 2A.1: Pronouns in the three most common cases

When you pair a pronoun with another noun and you can't determine the proper pronoun case, temporarily remove the noun and read the sentence again (perhaps out loud):

The vice president's dachshund ate the pulled-pork sandwiches that were intended for Devon and (I / me).

If you ignore the words "Devon and," the correct pronoun is easier to determine: "the sandwiches that were intended for me" is correct. 

To intensify a subject or object, add the corresponding pronoun in the correct case: 

NO: Us managers will travel to the conference a day early. 

("Us" is objective case, but "managers" is the subject).

YES: We managers will travel to the conference a day early.

NO: The conference will teach we managers the importance of collaboration. 

("We" is subjective case, but in this sentence, "managers" is the object of "teach").

YES: The conference will teach us managers the importance of collaboration.

The pronouns ending with -self, such as myself, yourself, himself, herself are called reflexive pronouns. A reflexive pronoun refers back to the subject of the sentence or clause. Never use a reflexive pronoun in place of an objective-case pronoun; reflexive pronouns can also be used to intensify objects.

NO: Please hand deliver the signed contract to Devon and myself.

YES:  Please hand deliver the signed contract to Devon and me. 

Reflexive pronouns are permissible in only three situations:  

    1. When the subject and object are the same, e.g., The president's advisor humiliated herself in front of the national media. 
    2. When the object of a preposition refers to the subject, e.g., The interns went out to dinner by themselves.
    3. For emphasis or intensification, e.g., If marketing won't conduct the end-user study, we'll do it ourselves. OR I gave the report to Robert himself.