Look Good in Print

This text will refresh your memory or introduce you to the common writing rules for Standard American English. It addresses the 22 most common errors found in writing. Applying and using the fundamentals of good writing will ensure that your writing is clear, concise, and achieves your intended purposes.

02C: VERBS

22. Use the Correct Mood  

A sentence's verb can express a variety of what are called moods. The mood indicates how the speaker feels about the sentence. The three most common verb moods in English are the following: 

  1. The indicative is the most common mood. It is used to make statements.

I love broccoli.

  1. The imperative mood issues a command. (Note that the subject in imperative sentences is an implied "you".)

Be kind.

  1. The subjunctive mood indicates uncertainty. The writer might be articulating a possibility, a hope, a wish, or a hypothetical. This mood presents the greatest challenge to writers. Here are some examples of sentences that call for subjunctive mood:  

If he were honest, he would admit that he needs to work harder. 

(Expresses a hypothetical.)

  I wish that the report were shorter.  

(Expresses a wish.)

If I were you, I'd make her a counteroffer. 

(Again, a hypothetical.) 

In hypothetical statements that use the subjunctive, the "if" condition is presumed to be untrue or unlikely to be true. For example, you can say, "If I were king, I'd wear a crown". But you're not the king; it's an untrue hypothetical. So you wear a baseball cap instead of a crown. 

Note that in subjunctive mood, the correct form of the verb is "were" (e.g., If I were king, . . .) rather than the indicative "was". In an indicative sentence, you would never say, "Back in highschool, I were a nerd".  Without a hope, a wish, or an uncertainty, you would use the indicative:  "I was a nerd".   

Subjunctive mood also is used when describing a "soft" or "implied" command. When the implied command is directed toward a third person (i.e., he, she, or it), the verb is expressed differently than it would normally be expressed. A few examples will help clarify this point.  

IMPLIED COMMAND USING SUBJUNCTIVE OF THE VERB "ARRIVE": The teacher recommended that the guest speaker arrive early for the presentation.

INDICATIVE SENTENCE - NO SUBJUNCTIVE NEEDED: A seasoned guest speaker always arrives early for presentations.

IMPLIED COMMAND USING SUBJUNCTIVE: The chairman of the board moved that the meeting be adjourned.

INDICATIVE SENTENCE - NO SUBJUNCTIVE NEEDED: The meeting is adjourned.