Here are some sentences I found in the ESL001 writing review forum:
Usually I wake up at 7am and after that I read my Bible then I wash my face and eat my breakfast next at 9am I usually start all my activities, I need to reply the email/message and I need to do some job and I will finish at 5pm and after that I went back home.
This description uses only one comma and one full stop. However, there are many sentences included in the description, and each one must end with a full stop. Also, there are some introductory words used, such as "usually" and "next", so commas should also be used to separate them from the rest of the sentence.
This is how I would punctuate the description to improve text clarity:
Usually, I wake up at 7 am, and after that, I read my Bible. Then, I wash my face and eat my breakfast. Next,) at 9 am, I usually start all my activities. I need to reply to the email/message, and I need to do some job, and I will finish at 5 pm. And after that, I went back home.