my last weekend

my last weekend

by Wilfried Ronsard BONI -
Number of replies: 1

I was very late for the church because I was so tired but I didn't wanted to stay at home on Sunday. After the cult my brother, my sister and I were gone to my favourite restaurant. We had taken a blue cab for to go at the restaurant. The meal was very delicious like alway. When we finished to eat while we was going at home I remembered that I was forgotten my phone at church. Fortunately a church member had keeping it for me. 

In reply to Wilfried Ronsard BONI

Re: my last weekend

by Fadila CHADOU -
hey there
good using of timeline of events.
some grammer errors needs to fix such as.....blue cab FOR TO go AT.... instead you can say....we took a blue cab to go to the....
in this case ,the past simple is more suitable than the past perfect .
good luck