hey there
good using of timeline of events.
some grammer errors needs to fix such as.....blue cab FOR TO go AT.... instead you can say....we took a blue cab to go to the....
in this case ,the past simple is more suitable than the past perfect .
good luck
good using of timeline of events.
some grammer errors needs to fix such as.....blue cab FOR TO go AT.... instead you can say....we took a blue cab to go to the....
in this case ,the past simple is more suitable than the past perfect .
good luck