The last vacation

The last vacation

by Laila Dawlatzada -
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In my last vacation about two years ago, I had visited my home-town. As far as you can see it was all nature! But you know what was wondering me the most?  While I climbed the mountain, I feel that I am diving among the ocean of clouds!  Well in there’s nature I got permanent partner of adventure named river. As long as I walked the river was accompanying me. On that time I got a feeling into nature. So, if anyone wants to enjoy at least for once only for himself/herself and reach the inner peace, try to connect with the nature. I hope you will enjoy reading of my passage , it the combination of four kind of sentences I had learned recently. I’d appreciate your comments, if you let me know  is there any mistake in my sentences structure .