Last year , my father brought me a cat for my birthday ? He was a cute , fluffy kitten with
green eyes , and I named him Cookie . I was so happy to have him , and from that
moment on , he became my best friend
Dear Maram Chebbi,
You had written a sweet story. I got some grammatical errors here. Let's check it,
Last, year. my father brought me a cat for my birthday. It was so cute. fluffy with green eyes. I named it 'Cookie'. I was so happy to have it and from that moment Cookie became my best friend.
You had written a sweet story. I got some grammatical errors here. Let's check it,
Last, year. my father brought me a cat for my birthday. It was so cute. fluffy with green eyes. I named it 'Cookie'. I was so happy to have it and from that moment Cookie became my best friend.