the best gift ever

Re: the best gift ever

by Faisal ahmed -
Number of replies: 0
Dear Maram Chebbi,
You had written a sweet story. I got some grammatical errors here. Let's check it,

Last, year. my father brought me a cat for my birthday. It was so cute. fluffy with green eyes. I named it 'Cookie'. I was so happy to have it and from that moment Cookie became my best friend.