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by Imran Khan -
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My name is Imran khan I m  from Pakistan I like gossip with friends whenever I get free I go to walk in the evening 

1) My name is Imran khan. I'm from Pakistan. I like gossip with friends, whenever I get free ; I go to walk in the evening.

When I get early in the morning I go to brush my teeth and take shower after that my mother  ready breakfast for me and called me for breakfast then I get ready for office  my office is 12 km away from my home home is at town I mostly use local transport 

2)When I get up early I'm the morning. I go to brush my teeth , and take shower. After that my mother ready  breakfast, and called me for breakfast. I get ready for office. My office is 12 km away from my home: home is at town. I mostly use local transport l.