Two days ago, my younger sister and I went on an errand at late night, around 10am to get something to eat. When coming back we saw something standing and not moving at all, putting all white but couldn't see it's face. We got so frightened and lost, didn't know what to do at that point. Unfortunately we didn't realize when we got home due to the Helter skelter we took to save our lives. LoL!
Hi! you have written in a well articulated and captivated manner.However,there are some basic mistakes regardless your story verbal shifting.1)got something to eat
Overall verbs are correctly written.
Overall verbs are correctly written.