She woke up early in the morning, she brushed her teeth and went for a jog, she had breakfast then went to work.
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I like to read books, watch movies in the evening and sometimes go to the park.
Corrections:
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She woke up early in the morning, brushed her teeth, and went for a jog. She had breakfast, then went to work.
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Explanation: The original sentence was a run-on sentence, combining multiple independent clauses without punctuation or conjunctions. I added commas to separate items in the list ("brushed her teeth, and went for a jog") and split the sentence into two separate thoughts for better clarity.
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I like to read books, watch movies in the evening, and sometimes go to the park.
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Explanation: The original sentence is a list, but it lacked a comma before "and" (known as the Oxford comma). The comma after "watch movies in the evening" makes the sentence clearer and ensures that "sometimes go to the park" is part of the list rather than a separate thought.
Correct punctuation makes sentences easier to read and understand by separating different actions and ideas properly.