Here is one paragraph I found in ESL001 writing review forum.
Review your written sentences about daily activities and post them in the discussion forum This allows you to see and compare the daily routines of your classmates Engaging in discussions helps improve writing skills and understanding of different lifestyles If interested you can also reply to your classmates posts sharing thoughts or asking questions about their activities to encourage interaction and learning
The above paragraph needs: the periods at the end of the sentence, the comma for separating items and enclosing , and apostrophe for possession. So, we can let the readers understand clearly.
Review your written sentences about daily activities and post them in the discussion forum. This allows you to see and compare the daily routines of your classmates. Engaging in discussions helps improve writing skills and understanding of different lifestyles. If interested, you can also reply to your classmates' posts sharing thoughts or asking questions about their activities to encourage interaction and learning.