Original: Usually I wake up at 7am and after that I read my Bible then I wash my face and eat my breakfast next at 9am I usually start all my activities, I need to reply the email/message and I need to do some job and I will finish at 5pm and after that I went back home.
My correction:
Usually, I wake up at 7 a.m., and after that, I read my Bible. Then I wash my face and eat my breakfast. Next, at 9 a.m., I usually start all my activities. I need to reply to emails and messages, and I need to do some work. I will finish at 5 p.m., and after that, I go home.