Daily routine

Daily routine

by Aesa Begum -
Number of replies: 1

I wake up at 7 am. Then go for walk. After that I eat my breakfast. After that I make ready my daughter for school. Then I prepared luny. Then I taken some rest. In the evening I spent some time with my self.Then prepared dinner.After that I go to bed.

In reply to Aesa Begum

Re: Daily routine

by Yohannes Dessalegn Girma -
Well done. I truly appreciate the chronological order of the activities.


Comments: It is better if you use "after that" and "then" once, instead of repetition. Also, add a comma after them.

Thank you.