My daily routine

My daily routine

by Pier Fausto Suclupe Navarro -
Number of replies: 1

Here are some sentences I found in the ESL001 writing review forum:

I usually wake up at 4:30 am to get ready for work, such as taking a bath and eat my breakfast.At the evening,when I got home, I usually prepare my meals. After eating, I wash the plates that I used , reading bible and go to bed after.

This is how I would punctuate the description to improve text clarity:


I usually wake up at 4:30 am to get ready for work, such as taking a bath and eating my breakfast. In the evening, when I get home, I usually prepare my meals. After eating, I wash the plates that I used, read the Bible, and go to bed afterward.

In reply to Pier Fausto Suclupe Navarro

Re: My daily routine

by Jonathan Otene -
I usually wake up at 4:30am, to get ready for work, such as taking my bath and eating my breakfast. In the evening, when I get home, I usually prepare my meals. After eating, I washed the dishes, read my Bible, and go to bed afterwards.