This is the example sentence I would like to discuss.
"I don't get up until my mother wake me up. I eat my breakfast which is something made up of flour and drink some tea. After that, I quickly help my mother in the kitchen so that I can study early. I learn English at the saylor website and YouTube. Wow! I'm so productive today and I think I deserve some good rest."
This is the latest discussion I can see and I want to discuss a few.
I would add some punctuation to the above sentence like
"I don't get up until my mother wake me up. I eat my breakfast; which is something made up of flour and drink some tea. After that, I quickly help my mother who is in the kitchen so that I can study early. I learn English at the Saylor website and Youtube. Wow! I'm so productive today and I think I deserve some good rest.
I think the main author has a decent grammatical knowledge and vocabulary range thus I don't need too much corrections.
